Tuesday, November 9, 2010

Outline for the Second Term Paper

OUTLINE

TOPIC: Arc

INTRODUCTION:
  • Every object on earth is pulled down by gravity.
  • An object should rise and fall in an arc.
  • This law is violated in Captain Tsubasa, Shaolin Soccer, and Wanted.
  • Thesis Statement.

BODY PARAGRAPH 1: Captain Tsubasa (1980s)
  • The soccer ball moves horizontally in the air.
  •  This kind of violation distracts me from enjoying the story.

BODY PARAGRAPH 2: Wanted (2008)
  • On a scene, Angelina Jolie’s character shoots a bullet in a circular path.
  • The bullet travels at the same height.

BODY PARAGRAPH 3: Shaolin Soccer (2001)
  • The dough stays in the air longer than it should.
  • The cooking pot moves diagonally when thrown to the ground, which will never happen in real life.

CONCLUSION:
  • Restating main points.
  • Violating law of physics can distract the viewer from enjoying the movies.
  •             I have a more critical eye when watching special effect or animated movies after learning the physics of animation.
     

1 comment:

  1. Outline is a bit thin; flesh out what you want to cover in the body of the paper before you start writing.
    9 of 10 points

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